Comments on: we are all alone now http://www.chemicallyimbalanced.org/2007/08/18/we-are-all-alone-now/ Tue, 20 Jul 2010 16:20:41 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.1 hourly 1 By: bz http://www.chemicallyimbalanced.org/2007/08/18/we-are-all-alone-now/comment-page-1/#comment-845 bz Wed, 22 Aug 2007 04:49:42 +0000 http://www.chemicallyimbalanced.org/2007/08/18/we-are-all-alone-now/#comment-845 couplet terminus purports to make a long story short and does couplet terminus purports to make
a long story short
and does

]]> By: )on http://www.chemicallyimbalanced.org/2007/08/18/we-are-all-alone-now/comment-page-1/#comment-844 )on Wed, 22 Aug 2007 04:18:27 +0000 http://www.chemicallyimbalanced.org/2007/08/18/we-are-all-alone-now/#comment-844 none can comfort the mourning of a memory of a woman whose presence is a dance like a sunrise at night while tending cherry and echinops we measure years in especial crops none can comfort
the mourning
of a memory of a woman
whose presence is a dance
like a sunrise at night

while tending cherry and echinops
we measure years in especial crops

]]> By: nathanael http://www.chemicallyimbalanced.org/2007/08/18/we-are-all-alone-now/comment-page-1/#comment-842 nathanael Tue, 21 Aug 2007 21:15:25 +0000 http://www.chemicallyimbalanced.org/2007/08/18/we-are-all-alone-now/#comment-842 correct on all points-- but should you will my spro to swill you would deem me one happy swine. correct on all points–
but should you will
my spro to swill
you would deem me
one happy swine.

]]> By: bz http://www.chemicallyimbalanced.org/2007/08/18/we-are-all-alone-now/comment-page-1/#comment-838 bz Tue, 21 Aug 2007 15:54:49 +0000 http://www.chemicallyimbalanced.org/2007/08/18/we-are-all-alone-now/#comment-838 your swagger was taken, it's sure, as a loogie imprecatorily lobbed by bloke whose spro is swill. your swagger
was taken, it’s sure,
as a loogie
imprecatorily lobbed
by bloke
whose spro is swill.

]]> By: nathanael http://www.chemicallyimbalanced.org/2007/08/18/we-are-all-alone-now/comment-page-1/#comment-832 nathanael Tue, 21 Aug 2007 01:00:23 +0000 http://www.chemicallyimbalanced.org/2007/08/18/we-are-all-alone-now/#comment-832 a triplet was th'intent, no joke, assonance my strategy: my swagger was taken, it seems as a wager far greater than would merit a bloke who writes like me. a triplet was th’intent,
no joke,
assonance my strategy:
my swagger
was taken, it seems
as a wager
far greater than would merit
a bloke
who writes like me.

]]> By: bz http://www.chemicallyimbalanced.org/2007/08/18/we-are-all-alone-now/comment-page-1/#comment-830 bz Mon, 20 Aug 2007 22:10:04 +0000 http://www.chemicallyimbalanced.org/2007/08/18/we-are-all-alone-now/#comment-830 is that a rhyming triplet? or just a wail of defeat? is that a rhyming triplet?

or just a wail of defeat?

]]> By: nathanael http://www.chemicallyimbalanced.org/2007/08/18/we-are-all-alone-now/comment-page-1/#comment-829 nathanael Mon, 20 Aug 2007 22:06:21 +0000 http://www.chemicallyimbalanced.org/2007/08/18/we-are-all-alone-now/#comment-829 ai ai ai ai ai ai

]]> By: nate the finger http://www.chemicallyimbalanced.org/2007/08/18/we-are-all-alone-now/comment-page-1/#comment-828 nate the finger Mon, 20 Aug 2007 22:02:27 +0000 http://www.chemicallyimbalanced.org/2007/08/18/we-are-all-alone-now/#comment-828 my thoughts exactly! my thoughts exactly!

]]> By: bz http://www.chemicallyimbalanced.org/2007/08/18/we-are-all-alone-now/comment-page-1/#comment-827 bz Mon, 20 Aug 2007 15:29:45 +0000 http://www.chemicallyimbalanced.org/2007/08/18/we-are-all-alone-now/#comment-827 well, now we're mired in actual, factual, fractal verse thanks to you who knew full well the subversive point but parlayed it into some carping curse. best consult a browning or an astrophel 'fore you strut, frowning, into this cartel. well, now we’re
mired in actual, factual, fractal verse
thanks to you
who knew
full well the subversive point
but parlayed it into some
carping curse.

best consult a browning
or an astrophel
‘fore you strut, frowning,
into this cartel.

]]> By: nathanael http://www.chemicallyimbalanced.org/2007/08/18/we-are-all-alone-now/comment-page-1/#comment-823 nathanael Sun, 19 Aug 2007 20:23:54 +0000 http://www.chemicallyimbalanced.org/2007/08/18/we-are-all-alone-now/#comment-823 now listen gents, let's keep it cool/for poetry's a supple rule/late esmeralda's loss indeed/has left us not a li'l bereaved/so shed a tear/tis not last year/yet rhymed insults are ill-concieved :) now listen gents, let’s keep it cool/for poetry’s a supple rule/late esmeralda’s loss indeed/has left us not a li’l bereaved/so shed a tear/tis not last year/yet rhymed insults are ill-concieved :)

]]> By: nate the finger http://www.chemicallyimbalanced.org/2007/08/18/we-are-all-alone-now/comment-page-1/#comment-820 nate the finger Sun, 19 Aug 2007 09:20:59 +0000 http://www.chemicallyimbalanced.org/2007/08/18/we-are-all-alone-now/#comment-820 pardon me, I did not know/should've taken notes from the pro . . . shake the trees/break my knees/learn good verse from mr. bz pardon me, I did not know/should’ve taken notes from the pro . . .
shake the trees/break my knees/learn good verse from mr. bz

]]> By: bz http://www.chemicallyimbalanced.org/2007/08/18/we-are-all-alone-now/comment-page-1/#comment-819 bz Sun, 19 Aug 2007 04:45:22 +0000 http://www.chemicallyimbalanced.org/2007/08/18/we-are-all-alone-now/#comment-819 your hokey verse/goes bad to worse your hokey verse/goes bad to worse

]]> By: Nate the finger http://www.chemicallyimbalanced.org/2007/08/18/we-are-all-alone-now/comment-page-1/#comment-816 Nate the finger Sun, 19 Aug 2007 00:07:31 +0000 http://www.chemicallyimbalanced.org/2007/08/18/we-are-all-alone-now/#comment-816 unavoidable plight, you should have known/once, yearly, lim'ted glory's shown . . . irresistible, one's left oft' annoyed/five pounds from Tom could fill the void . . . unavoidable plight, you should have known/once, yearly, lim’ted glory’s shown . . .

irresistible, one’s left oft’ annoyed/five pounds from Tom could fill the void . . .

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